Holiday30

Honestly, that confuse feel you get at the beginning of the chapter is what I was looking for from most of my readers. the reason why is because the kid ...

Thank you, for your comment, lol I have a rough time with breaking up chapters cuase I try my best to stay on topic, but on the other hand when ...

Thank you for the review

Okay, so this piece definitely brought tears to my eyes. (Really sad what happen to those people on that train.) But you writing style is still exquisite like always. I ...

Okay cool writing. You was able to successfully use descriptive words that painted a picture for the readers to see.You spoke with a lot of intelligence and I am sure ...

Ms. Blue Africa, I see what you saying about the average high school boy knowing, this info....lol I actually had to go look up that info myself.....confusing as ever, by ...

I see what you saying, Honestly I wanted to add in the fact that Simon car was being watched anyway, you know being that he moved and sold guns for ...

Thank you socks, Sorry if I went overboard with describing Adrina. I just want people to see her like I did in my head, as Kinte seen her. I will ...

Blue Africa, thank you for the review, I am sorry if I offended you as a woman. I wasn't trying to sound sexual or anything I was just trying to ...

Thank you socks

Lol this is by far the best review I read on my story. I like it because you just didn't harshly criticize my story you told me what you liked ...

Alright just p.m. when you are ready

Thanks Haredrier. Lol and I think I will message you, however I will say this, I have the Texan coming off like this for a reason like you said, his ...

Hey once again thanks, but Meanbooks I will say I do tell where everyone is at and where they are fighting. I will admit though i have no idea how ...

Thank you and I appreciate your review, but as I stated to meanbooks, the way you two see the religions in this story is totally different from how I am ...