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Hey take your time, great things comes to those who are patient. I believe yo will delver another beautiful chapter to us and when you do I will be reading ...

Lol, I wasn't trying to be rude when I said what I said to you, because I know my typing or writing style is a bit hard to grasp and ...

Hey man no problem I already know how tough it is as a writer......lol if you go to my page you will see I hardly get any good reviews, so ...

Hey man, I want your confidence boost, so I can keep reading such an awesome story

I still don't understand what you are saying, I have read this story many times over and so has others and they say that it's not stiff or boring. In ...

Hey Steggy, Thank you for the review but I have to say I feel it was a bit unfair. However, I have come to realize that not everyone goes and ...

OOOO, I like the PROLOGUE! And quiet frankly I wish you would go ahead and start the story man. But then again I haven't herd or seen you up here ...

Hey I appreciate your input but at the same time I find it quite insulting to me. The reason why is because grammar, yes I did make a lot of ...

I don't wanna spoil the ending for u so I can't answer that question "Didn't Jugo just kill Shevia right now? That's what happened here, right?" Just suggest u read ...

Well Tyger eye ..... for this to just be a rough draft I lked it a lot. I wish that there was more elaboration on the parents but I am ...

This is your second review on a story I have done. Thank you. As far as Dialogue I know its kind of a lot but my charaters just love talking ...

Thanks Dino, but its not Chapters, It's just one story broken up, You probably understand the plot better if you read part one. But thanks for the critiques

LOl, once again........you never cease to amaze me. This story defiantly sent chills down my spine and made it wiggle like a worm on a hook. But never the less ...

Thank you, but I kind of understood what you was talking about. I had a lot of misspelled words throughout this story. But I think the concept was hard for ...

Well besides the the fact that I may have written in a weird way and the fact you utterly destroyed my work I will take what you say and will ...