HoliBanana

Tysm! This first chapter was written a few years back so I wasn't sure people would like it :) thanks for the support!

Gave those little bits a little fix :) hope you can check that bit.

Thanks for the feedback, this chapter was written a while back so some things are too childish. I will review these bits to keep the pace consistent. Thanks for the ...

wow this is a lot of comment lmao :^

Ahh, makes sense :) Ut is awesome tho, don't get me wrong. I'd love to see the rest of the story.

This chapter is a lot longer, but I wanted to introduce several new factors to the story. Sorry if it is a little funky, I wrote this a while back.

I am deeply captivated by your evocative expression of emotion throughout your work. Your willingness to lay bare both the pleasant and the disquieting aspects of your experiences crafts a ...

Many of the questions are answered farther into the book. For example, your main question, how he passed through the evacuation is soon after explained in the next chapter (Spoiler: ...