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Thanks Alec for your advice. It's heartening to know that the suspense is building. It's impossible to tell that myself seing as I know what's going to happen. Need any ...

This is the best book I've ever read, hands down. It made me cry for the first time in 5 years.

Yeah, it's a true story. My mum, dad and I made it up around the campfire while my brother and sister played Nintendo DSs.

Thanks both of you, so, note to self - more of Mike's thoughts and reactions, and remember those question marks. Thanks for the stars also. Much appreciated.

Wow. I completely forgot about this. I did do some more, but then it just slipped my mind. I think that was just before exams. I must finish it.

Thank you kindly. I want to know the past. (Perhaps coming in later chapters?) Coming in earlier chapters actually. I cut in halfway through a planned novel to write this ...

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Thanks for your super helpful yet super nice review. :D

Thank you very very much. I'm so glad you were able to help me out. Thanks for the star by the way :D

Sorry, but this is the end of this story for the moment. I really only intended to do it as a character study. I will be doing more, if you ...

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for helping me to improve this piece. I'll pay particular attention to the part when the soldier is trying to tie James up on my ...

Thanks all for your comments. I originally wrote this as a "snapshot" of a planned novel. Now that you mention it though, I may as well do another "snapshot" of ...

Cheers for the review. When I finally finish school (14 weeks to go now) I'll be able to get stuck back into my writing. There probably won't be much from ...

Don't try to "get it". That's not the idea. :wink: Most of my works are rated R. The Accidental Rebellion is rated R because of violence and swearing (except chapter ...