Queer title, queer poem...
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‘Twas raining hard on the caravan
Nothing to do but sit
That morning I’d eaten so much ham
That I needed to do a shit
I’d held it in all morning
Not wanting to get wet
But the pain in my guts gave a warning
So I ran as fast as a jet
I hurtled along the stone path
As treacherous as ever
I got distracted by Mr Darth
When something hit my nethers
I was soaked through
Rolling on the ground
Desperately needing to poo
When I heard a familiar sound
It seemed that I had shat me daks
How embarrassing
Mr Darth was fondling his sack
When I saw a chicken wing
I felt a little hungry
So I tried to eat the chook
When I realised I was in Bunbury
And Mr Darth was a book
I hadn’t read in a week
And I felt a sudden need
So I decided to have a peek
And it was all about weed
Then a smell came wafting
Brought me back to reality
My nose began to sting
And my name was Mafaggoty
Mr Darth was still standing there
But he’d finished masturbating
He was now eating a pear
And the aforementioned chicken wing
I picked myself up off the path
Brushed away the stones
I waved good bye to Mr Darth
When I slid on the chicken bone
I slid all the way to the dunny block
And bumped into some sheila
She was wearing a frizzy frock
And an ornamental potato peeler
She offered me a peeler for free
But I didn’t want one
I was so busting to do a wee
That I didn’t notice the bun
My foot landed on the bun
And I fell and hit my head
I didn’t find it very fun
When almost to death I bled
But I picked myself up off the ground
Out of sheer will to do a poo
At the back of my jeans there was a mound
As I ducked into the loo
But the cubicles were all full
I was just about to crack
I ran over to the urinal
And emptied out my daks
Then in came Mrs Quince
The park’s toilet cleaner
And with her Mr Mince
Who was much much meaner
I quickly pushed past them
And ran onto the road
I tripped on a flower stem
And landed on a toad
The toad blew up on my foot
It ate away my skin
I thought I was kaput
When I noticed Quai Gon Jin
He was fighting with Darth Vader
He stabbed him in the balls
I glanced down at my radar
It turned out we were at Niagara falls
The water fell on the ground
And splashed me in the face
The water was actually brown
So I had a running race
Whilst running I fell over
I’d tripped on a glace cherry
I saw a dog called rover
Eating an elderberry
But the elderberry was the wrong colour
It was brown not red
I tried to think of a rhyme for colour
When I was hit by a flying bed
The bed was made of sheep
Stuck together with glue
I had to make a leap
To avoid some flying shampoo
I landed on the bed
It was very springy
When I saw a lady who was dead
Who tasted very zingy
I didn’t actually taste her though
But one could tell by looking
That her name was Mo
And she needed cooking
So I took out my frypan
Put in some oil
For flavour I added a clam
And put her on to boil
She floated in the water
The steam really stank
Then I saw her daughter
And needed to have a wank
I left the pot on the stove
and went behind a tree
When I saw a treasure trove
And I jumped with glee
I picked up some gold coins
And a pretty ring
And a stone saying; “Gird your loins”
When I felt a painful sting
A bee had stung me on the bum
And I was allergic
The allergic reaction made me come
And become asthmatic
I jumped into the pot
Next to the old dead lady
But the pot was full of snot
But at least it was shady
Then I realised the stove was on
I got 3rd degree burns
I needed something to cool upon
Apart from boiling urns
Then I saw a doctor
His name was Dr Pratha
But he was actually a helicopter
And his name was Arthur
It turned out he was a smuggler
Who dealt in illegal budgies
He taught me to be a juggler
And how to eat my veggies
We went to the library together
When suddenly he got wind
I ate some fruit leather
While the librarian spinned
Then in came a giant rabbit
He stabbed me with a pin
I told him it was a bad habit
When Along came Quai Gon Jin
He’d finished his previous fight
And wanted to read a book
But he walked into a fluorescent light
And staggered into a hook
I decided to steal his light sabre
It may come in handy
When the librarian went into labour
With a baby named Andy
But when the baby was born
She changed its name to lafawnduh
She said; “One day this baby will star in porn”
And she put it in the blender
I went to get a pack of cards
As the baby did a poo
It had the consistency of granite shards
So the librarian took it to the loo
Then in came the sister Karen
We had a game of Mayo
She wore her hair like a marron
And quoted Galileo
She said; “doubt is the father of invention”
And grew a long grey beard
I thought that I should mention
She was getting rather weird
But then again she’s religious
So that could be expected
Then she became cartilaginous
I thought these things were connected
But I didn’t have time to think
When flying through the door
Came a robotic skink
With a very loud roar
I wet myself with fear
And jumped through the glass
When I heard with my right ear
The sound of a jack-ass
I walked in the other direction
Towards the staff car park
When I started getting an erection
And found myself on Noah’s arc
A goat walked past and did a crap
I said; “how very dare you”
The poo landed on a treasure map
And covered up a clue
I decided to find the treasure
Despite the map being soiled
I took many good measures
To avoid accidents involving al-foil
-To be continued
Wow. I completely forgot about this.
I did do some more, but then it just slipped my mind. I think that was just before exams. I must finish it.
I don't care about understanding this or reviewing this.Its way too hilarious.
Funny lines
But I picked myself up off the ground
Out of sheer will to do a poo
At the back of my jeans there was a mound
As I ducked into the loo
But the cubicles were all full
I was just about to crack
I ran over to the urinal
And emptied out my daks
I’d held it in all morning
Not wanting to get wet
But the pain in my guts gave a warning
So I ran as fast as a jet
However the places without the disgusting violent stuff bore you to death.Please be more graphic and gross in the continuation but not just for the sake of it.
Random stuff never made so much sense.Long time since real funny stuff was posted on the site.
Keep it coming.
Don't try to "get it". That's not the idea.
Most of my works are rated R. The Accidental Rebellion is rated R because of violence and swearing (except chapter 3, which is PG for a light course language).
Meredith Vs. Al Quada is R because a guy puts his **** in a car's fuel valve, and also because of course language, violence and drug use. (And it could leave you mentally scarred)
This is R because it has masturbating, a baby gets put in the blender, and violence. (I don't think it should be R because it's hardly in a serious context - but rules are rules)
Thanks for thinking this was a bit funny. Let's hope nobody picks option e.
Jeff
What the...? How random. I get it, but I don't get it. Well, some lines did make me giggle a bit, so... there.
Forgive me for asking, but why are your works all rated R?
It isn't for everybody I guess.
This was experimental. I started this with my mum when we were just being silly on holidays, but I decided to continue it. It was really fun to write, but you can probably guess I've never done poetry before.
Not my idea of funny. I like my humor a bit more sophisticated.
Humor aside, the rhyme scheme sounded natural and was consistent, which was a definite plus. Unfortunately, the same can't be said of the rhythm/syllable count. While most of the stanzas followed a similar syllable count, there were several stanzas that came out of nowhere rhythm-wise which really derailed the flow of the poem. The first example of this happening is this stanza:
I was soaked through
Rolling on the ground
Desperately needing to poo
When I heard a familiar sound
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