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  • Article / Essay » Politics, Narrative Re: Teach Love, not Hate

    The title is very attracting and the content is good as well. But actually in this piece the idea behind the article is more solid than the way it is ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: 14

    I did like this . BUT I still feel that a lot more can be felt by a person with the happenings as above. You can describe and beautify it ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Sweet Heaven by Tayo

    I can not express how good this is . It took me into a real romantic mood . FOR SOMETIME , I REALLY FELT THIS HAPENNING . It is so ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'm sick

    I loved this work. It is truly different from what it seemed to be . I am with my heart on the ending . It is beautifully conclusive . It ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I want to remove the world's pain

    I like this poem. It is inspirational . It tells us what a truly selfless service to our people can bring us gives us the strength to look beyond the ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: When the Dust Settles

    Verily striking work . This also includes suspence as per my opinion . Such a wonderful description . It is also written with high precision . And not at a ...

    Jan 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: With(out) You

    Though beautifully written , it lacks the real touch of emotions that a truly desolate heart would embody. Besides as per my knowledge , poetic device is not used in ...

    Jan 3, 2016


Depression is messin with the wrong person over here cuz in the months that I was doing better I was sharpening my weapons for this war.
— Kaia