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Re: The InterMallium Episode 1
HIYA! I am obsessed with this concept dude. Its almost like a backrooms but with an entire functioning society inside. I'm going to start with the positives then head on ...
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Re: The Heart's Song and the Brain's Tune
I'm not sure if i should call this a poem or not, but it is in a very different style. I like how at first the Brain is correct, but ...
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Re: long long distances
Hello, I think this is a nice poem. I'm not the best at these review things but here we go, so, the first thing I'd point out would be how ...
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Re: 👒🎀 Aura and Polly 🎀👒
This is a very short story, but it gets to the point very quickly, Aura dies, and Polly gets turned to Mercy. The details about Aura making hats and being ...
Sep 4, 2024 -
Re: Infinitely
So I like this poem the way it's about someone who feels a lot of emotions when they think about the person they love. I like the star imagery. The ...
Sep 4, 2024 -
Re: The Star Children
This story really spoke to me on how time and human progress affect our natural world. I like how the first narrator is nervous about losing the stars, the second ...
Sep 4, 2024
