HildegardHope

hello! i liked this poem. It vibes well and feels almost graphic at times. I think the weakest stanza is iv. It isn't bad but it could be better. It ...

Hello! This is a really nice poem, so i thought i'd pop in for a review ^_^ the MC def has some serious daddy issues. It seems like the dad ...

hello. Man! I love this series. The chapters are a bit short, but I think the break helped you with the description a bit. I love the super organized guy ...

Hiya! Sorry for taking so long to review. So the first thing! In the first chapter, i was under the impression that Ze and Zill died. This was probably intentional, ...

Hi! Hope here, you left an ask for a review on my post so here I am! This is going to be short because I don't really read Political stories ...

Hiya, Hope here! First off i wana say great job! I really like this, as far as the review goes, I don't normally review short form so i'm kinda at ...

Hiya! I'm Hope. Love the concept, the grim reaper is always an interesting character, and personifying death is always fun. Death having children is typically only seen in like, Percy ...

Alrighty! and Hi! Lets get into this... FIRST UP! FORMATTING & THE BORING STUFF. (everyone formats things slightly differently, I am just pointing out a few quality of life improvements ...

Alrighty, so I liked this, I've always liked steampunk, and I feel like you did a good job with the aesthetic. This is going to be a short review because ...

FORMATING, DESCRIPTIONS, ECT ECT... Alrighty, so, the first thing I noticed is that there is a lack of descriptions, I don't know how things smell, how they feel, what the ...

Hi again! This chapter is a huge improvement from the last, although I would suggest running the next one through a grammar checker, I noticed a lot of grammar mistakes, ...

Alrighty, so the first thing I'm going to point out is this is very short. It is only a few hundred words, which seems a bit short for a chapter. ...

Hi again! Only 18 hours late this time! Do you mind @'ing me when new chapters come out if you remember? Most of the problems I noticed last time seem ...

Ok! Here I am again lol! I'm a fast reader, i don't have too much time because i'm writing this in class but lets go! So I'm noticing the same ...

Well, dang, you've got yourself a new follower. This story gives me huge Freelancers vibes, which is a show I love. Ok Ok ok, let me get into the Review. ...