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HikariHateke

  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Not Posting

    Amazing! I love the message that came from this! I don't plan on posting Every slightly messy piece Sometimes I just write To grant my mind some peace Exactly some ...

    Jul 30, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: We only go as far as we walk

    I'm new to reviewing but Wow this was really good! We only go as far as we walk that's True and everyone goes different ways, some walk far, others are ...

    Jul 28, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Depths Of the Sea

    One of the characters with water powers recently kinda turned into the sea (it's hard to explain) and now everyone is sad cuz it's like she's dead but not (cuz ...

    Jul 27, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Depths Of the Sea

    As a Ninjago fan this low-key hurt me lol. but also filled me with wonder! "I would sit for centuries, until everyone I ever knew was dead, along with their ...

    Jul 27, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Ocean waves

    Thx! If green planning on editing it (but unfortunately the device i use to write broke so it'll have to wait though I did edit it a bit just now) ...

    Jul 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Ocean waves

    *character, docter (sorry my screen is small lol)

    Jul 25, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Ocean waves

    The this meant a lot! And I based the sister but off a friend (their parents want them to be a foster but she wants to be a paleontologist and ...

    Jul 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Honesty

    Good for you! Loved how you wrote this it definitely didn't make me feel things haha (*sobs*)

    Jul 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Riverbed of the dead

    Oh this was cool! It was a little creepy and just super good! (Sorry im not that good at critical reveiwing) but ummm I liked how you portray things!

    Jul 19, 2021
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Ocean waves

    Jul 19, 2021


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind