HessicaJolt

Thank you so much for the reviews so far, I should have probably put more into it, and added the fact that she is on pills already. This is the ...

This is awesome! I felt that way about some pieces before. Like how you can see it play out sometimes like a movie, or if your really there. A bystander, ...

This is different, I like it! Its really weird, and gave me a creepy feeling. I read it over a couple of times, and I really enjoy it. Keep it ...

I like this! I would love to be the strong willed girl who ignores people that try and sugar you into handing your heart over. Unfortunately I'm not, so this ...

I really like this, if you think about it, its extremely deep and very lovely. I love it. I really really do.

This definitely looks like it came from the heart. I absolutely love it. Its beautiful, even though short. Great job!

Extremely sad, but beautifully written. I love the imagery, and it felt as if I could see the person and the scenario. Beautiful, in a depressing way.

Excellent job! The end almost scared me though, I thought he died. Great job, I love the piece, and really there wasn't anything to critique that I could find. And ...