Hereticteen

There is an amazing concept behind this poem! I really like how you expressed different perspectives and found a way to make that "shapeshift" work wonderfully. There is nothing about ...

It is amazing how in the very first verse you were able to set the mood in my mind. Quiet. This poem IS very realistic, minus the "Everything is dead ...

This poem is very interesting. There is a surprising amount of power in just 12 lines. I don't understand all of it, but part of me thinks that it's purpose ...

This poem is amazing. As someone that has experienced severe depression, I can honestly say that this might be the best poem i've ever seen written to address depression. You ...

I absolutely love your rhyme scheme! It looks like something I would write (just very different genres)! I love that you focus on scenery, something that I struggle with personally, ...

This is incredibly well-written! The emotion is very "in your face" and inescapable. This seems like lyrical poetry to me, in which case, all of it makes sense except for ...