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Hi there! So I read both of them and I think this one is the better of the two. This is because you seem to be concentrating on the emotions ...

On the contrary, SweetMoments, anyone can come up with a good idea. Writing is about expressing it in a way that makes people interested in it. Proper grammar is just ...

That was totally cute! I loved it! I'm not here to criticize it, I'm here to say that it was entertaining and that it was original! Not many people write ...

That was an entertaining piece! Our new hangout, I mean. I thought it rather dramatic, to be honest ---> That one word 'hangout' it completely ruined the mood for me. ...

Hey there! I'm here to review for you! You're right, it does sound more like a mystery than romance. Still, that's just the prologue, maybe you're planning on making it ...

Well blackbird, I must say that you have produced yet another absolutely magical piece ;) The wife clamped the cell phone shut and launched it across the room. It clattered ...

Hi there! I'm here to review as requested. Already read the last one and the revised one and here's what I think: [quote="blackbird12"]Revised this piece since the critiques seemed to ...

Some nitpicks :D It was the most gorgeous necklace I had ever seen it was a heart shaped “ Connor, the teachers need your help…Sapphire’s disappeared.” - It would work ...

Hello there! Let's see: It was a scorching day, the sweat rang in beabs down drakes back ---> Drake should be capitalized, and the whole sentence restructured. It was hard ...

Hello there! I used to had have, I think you mean :P family and friends and happy life. But now? I'm lost. Anyway, I have to agree with the people ...

Hello! I'm Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today! As the strands took their time landing on the floor my mom/ mother said through the comb in her ...

Hello! I am Stela, and I will be reviewing for you today! Write because you must A great ability thrust Upon you like a trust That can't be broken I ...

Hello, I am Stela, and I shall be reviewing for you today ;) I loved this, it was very patriotic ;) What I liked about this, is how you started ...

Hello, I would suggest that you post this in separate parts as people are probably intimidated by its length. I will, however, review part of it, because I've seen it ...

Hello! My name is Stela! And I'll be reviewing this for you, today! So, when I read this poem, the first thing I noticed is a bit of a contradiction. ...