Hecate

Hey WritingWolf, I love this. It feels like a trip through time, if that is what you intended. You start off with a very archaic style and then, as the ...

Hey there! Hecate to review :) Apologies for not getting to this sooner, but I am amid cramming for exams at the moment. I like the overall flow of the ...

Hey, Hecate here to review for you! I will start with some nitpicks. I landed head and shoulder first after being thrown into the room. I think you should just ...

Hey, Overall I thought this was a good read. I saw only when I finished that you didn't want a review, but I had already written some points, so I ...

Hi there, I decided to do a review for you. This will be a bit on the short side, mostly because I think that you've got an excellent piece of ...

Hey there! It's a pity that no one has commented on this piece of work, but I am here to fix that. Let's begin with some nitpicks: [q] "She was ...

Hey Ethaniel! I see that Dreamy has addressed some of the grammar/ technical errors, but I also found some that I thought could be fixed. One thing is the title ...

Hey! I love this. I especially love the last stanza: 'The lions roared, and the vultures screeched To penetrate the veil of happiness I drape across my face. But eventually ...

Hey Magpie, When I decided to review your work, I thought people might have shied away from it due to its length but now I realize the reason lies elsewhere. ...

Hey there Doc! I'm here to review for you today :) On the plus side: This was intriguing! I want to know more. That's always good, you know, to hook ...

Hey, this was a great read! It flowed well. However, it does feel like it was the start of something as opposed to a story that stands alone. I really ...

Hey there Doc, ' I'm here to review for you! I read this story before review day, but I wanted to save it for today! Overall, I really liked it. ...

Hey! Here to review as requested! So, I do think this is the making of something great. Here are a few tips to consider: 1. 'Sam'- If you read your ...

Hey Neva, Well, it looks like people gave you great reviews already. But, since you requested one, here it goes: Firstly, I did like it. It was dark, it was ...

Hi, I'm Stela and I'm here to review for you today :) It had been a week since school started and all my classmates were still giving me awkward glances ...