Hawkie

Yay, a new member! Welcome to YWS! A quick reminder: it's YWS etiquette to keep the review:work ratio at 2:1. That is, before you post a work, make sure you ...

Wow, Statik! This was certainly very odd, interesting, and overall very good! I love your beautiful, beautiful imagery and use of metaphors. I also liked how free and natural the ...

Bonjour mes amis, hello hello, and I'll be reviewing you today! Let's begin, shall we? But it the end it all payed of A few misspellings: "But in the end ...

Hello, hello! I'm Hawkie and I'll be reviewin you to-day. This was a creative idea. I liked the description of the terror and panic in the fox's mind as he ...

I don't agree with the above review (no offense, Winie! ;)) Yes, poetry does have "rules" to follow, that help keep things in check and are good basic guidelines. But ...

I like this. It's descriptive and oddly chilling. Drowning is a primal fear that this piece definitely addresses. I agree with the other reviews about the flow of the story ...

Hiya there! This is a nice beginning to a story. The "children with special powers" thing is used fairly often, but definitely not done to death. I can see many, ...

Hi, Phantom! Looks like this first rip-apart is mine! Nitpicky Stuff The sun was setting fast and I was lost. Good beginning. I started walking again, searching for a place ...

Ooh, I really like this. Not much to say about it. When a voilent wave, Should be "violent." Until, This "until" doesn't serve much of a purpose. Maybe cut it ...

Hi again! You asked for a review, so a review you get. :D Overall This is a really sweet story, I can feel the tenderness behind it. :) Nice work. ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I'm Hawkie, and I'll be glad to help you out if you're a bit confused, so feel free to PM me. For a reminder, though, it's ...

This is a really sweet little piece. I see nothing wrong with the plot or characters at large, so I'm just going to be picky and point out a few ...

Hello! And welcome to YWS! Silence clung to each living entity in the room, as the still figures of two men devoured the soft ring of light illuminated by the ...

Hey! Nice song! I imagine it as a passionate country song, am I right? It's hard to review lyrics, because you don't know the tune and how the song would ...

Hi there! You said you wanted reviews so here I am! Her hair was wavy, long and silvery blonde, and her eyes, wide and almond shaped, were an emerald green. ...