HausOfDay

With a little squeak here, and a squeak there, this poem could be even more beautiful than it already is. Such things as the timing of words to create correct ...

Quite similar to Paradise Lost, in context only, I think. Dealing with ancient evils, ect. You have written a wonderful poem, and I adore the ideas and themes. The message ...

This made me both very sad and very proud. I don't know you, so to say I'm proud may seem a little invading, but none the less, I am proud ...

The first stanza was definitely the best. You captured the emotion wonderfully, perhaps because it was so raw, and a more nerve twanging subject. I love this: Even her scent ...

You are very brave to talk about an experience like this, and for that I hail you. It's lovely to see people making use of a bad situation and turning ...

The imagery is beautiful. I agree with everyone else, the yolk moon is f'ing gorgeous. I'm so jealous I didn't come up with that. I also love that you 'cup ...

This reminds me so much of Paradise Lost, really beautiful language. I often feel this way about humans, if that is what you're addressing here, if not I'm completely off, ...

This is absolutely wonderful! I loathe the men who hit her, ugh, bastards. Very impressed by the detail, especially like the 'tangy blood', that was lovely. You write so well ...

I enjoy the detail that you go into, and the comparison between the bird and gems is wonderful, more so because it is an oxymoron, such a thing is impossible, ...

I am quite unhappy to say that I relate to this. I love the theme of the poem, and I think that you should certainly write more of the like. ...

Sad poem, but quite beautiful :) I made a connection between the bird and the wire, as though this is it's 'life line', like a wire to someones heart. This ...

I've never reviewed before, I think I'm going to be quite terrible, but I'll give it a shot. I really enjoy the second and third stanza, 'the silence rings', I ...