Hassanfs

Hello. So I like how you formatted the poem. The breaks and the spaces. The way you distributed a single word over two lines. No problems with the flow. I'd ...

Hello. I liked this. Short but effective. This made me think of death, especially the silence bit. And then the effect it has on others who observe it, and are ...

Hello there :) What pulled me towards this piece was the title. Because I've had acne for as long as I can remember. I know how it feels. You'd think ...

I really loved the message you were conveying in this poem. I mostly agree on this. Some people just throw out random lines , assemble them in stanzas and call ...

Hello So...umm I have mixed feelings about this poem. The flow was good, and it went along smoothly. The punctuation was appropriate. I liked the vibe it possessed, but I ...

I loved the way you formatted this poem. And you managed to say a lot in so few words. I think the middle part ( where the spider is introduced ...

Hellooo. Hassan here with a review. This will probably be my last review today, so I'll try to make it really good. :D So lets begin. Hmm. I liked the ...

Ok. weeelll I don't know what to make of this. I'm not really good at reviewing this kind of stuff... soh forgive me if I sound too...weird.. .-. So this ...

Hello. Hassan here with a review. So the things I liked in this were the detail given to the characters and how well you expressed them and the their feelings. ...

Helloo again! So what I noticed immediately was that this chapter was more or less similar to the last one. The same pattern. Birth. House scene where you tell something ...

This was a different story. I liked the idea, but it moves too fast. Slow down a bit. The fast pace of the events made it seem a bit artificial. ...

Wow this was very good. I couldn't find any problems with this, and I like your descriptive style of writing. The imagery you created in the first paragraph was beautiful. ...

Wow. This was really amazing. Not surprised it won the scholastic award thingy. Is it published? Cause I would love to get it. And if it's not, then it should ...

Hellooo. I liked this poem. Especially the vibe running through it. Gave me the chills. The flow was good. Not to fast, not to slow, and most importantly it was ...

Helloo there. Hassan here with a review. So I like the theme this is about. I loved the imagery you created and the way you had woven the words together. ...