HarmonyGirl2012

Thank you, Jet. I totally agree with the comments you've made and I can see your confusion. I wrote this last year and I definitely knew there were plenty of ...

Sometimes life can feel as though you are trapped underwater, but I believed, no matter what it takes, there are always ways to swim to the top. However, sometimes getting ...

Oh, thanks you guys :) Elizabeth, I'll have to fix this, thank you.

Wow, this is a good poem with very strong emotion! I love the way you talked from two different perspectives, but kept the same poem. Very well done. :)

Well, thanks everyone for the help. :D

Okay well, here is version number 2 :) I carry the good and the bad of things around me. the thoughts that pass by and the words that were left ...

Actually, I really like that setup and totally understand the annoyance of the "I carry". Thanks everyone, I'll change it :smt003

Yeah, I understand what you both mean, thanks, but also this was for school a while back and I HAD to repeat the lines like that. All of the poems ...

Thank you both for your ideas and opinions :) I will take them both into consideration. This is also something I didn't spent too much time on, but I can ...

Hey Dawn, Thanks so much for you comment. Socrates was an extraordinary person that's for sure! :smt003 I'll post some things soon, but no guarantees ;)

I think this was well written; You gave the reader a picture from the Titanic, but also you set the mood. Very nice :) ~Allison