HarmonyGirl2012

Hey, I agree that you might want to be more specific and ask yourself, why, why is this happening and what is going on? I too have trouble with getting ...

Hey, I really think you could do more with this poem, but for what you have written, it was pretty funny. I know you mentioned that you wrote it fast, ...

I love the thought of your poem and the ideas you worked in. My only thoughts are, you might be able to add your question into the poem some how ...

Untitled My angry thoughts are left to ferment. My patience is waning as fury manifests its self (itself?) Lies lingering on the tip of my tongue Waiting to escape this ...

Hey, I thought this was very well written. I loved how you started off with a song and left everyone wondering. Awesome :). I think you should continue writing and ...

I am riveted by the thin lines of blood that trails down your arms You scream you scream, 'God help me!' I am riveted by the thin lines of blood ...

This is different, but in a good way. I like your poem because I thought it was well put together and interesting. I could totally picture the whole "walk" and ...

I really love this poem!! I loved it at the funeral and I still love it now! Gram was such an extraordinary person that's for sure. You emphasized this in ...

I thought this was great. The title caught my attention because it made me curious to know what your poem was about. All in all, the poem was great because ...

Ah yes, life is a very interesting topic! I could go on and on about this, but I won't. I too agree with you about letting "hate" and "grudges" go. ...