Harley

Nebraska- you can have a cameo :P

I'll help you make it good. Step 1: Change nothing. Step 2: Write more of it. Step 3: Post it. :thumb: Great job, Jack.

Iowa popped into my head, suggest a state, Sam, and your wish shall be granted... :roll: :thumb:

Great title, I loved it. The main character is a little like me, 'cuz she is observant. Needs a little work in some places but overall a nice little story. ...

Yeah, well i was planning for Drew to say something like this: "Okay, I know I've been done. The girl that thinks she is different, is individual.. it's like another ...

Yeah, this is really good! I only saw one spelling mistake- lye should be lay. I loved it!! Definitely one of the best on here.

The edit is MUCH better, Midnight. I really like it, I can understand it, and that's saying something. :P Great job!

Wow this is excellent, Jack! I really like the fighting scene, but i didn't think i would, you write it differently, with no big words or anything. Go you! I ...

Thanks! It was real fun to write... lol Hope I did ya justice :D

Topic change, anyone?

Cool poem Eliz, untrue though. :D

i agree, but i liked the fairytale idea, and i think you should definitely include more continuation on it, as i think the poem doesn't tell you why things aren't ...

It means that she was sure he would say something else, other than "Nevermore". It's hard to find words that sound good and rhyme. here's a page which has "The ...

Nice, emz, very nice. I loved the detail, and that whole story about the dude in the car was pretty cool. I liked the nurse idea; he should fall in ...

Sam, you're so ORIGINAL!!!!!!!!! Gawd, I may have t copy ure whol sk8er theme and this new blog thingy 8) Your stuff really says a lot about you, Sam.