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Re: Broken Guitar
No way was it confusing; I'm just nitpicky! :) As for the "its" vs. "his", either's fine. It's 100% your choice. Whatever you decide, I'm sure it's going to be ...
May 22, 2015 -
Re: I Am Sorry
I'd love to! My review will probably be up by tomorrow. :)
May 21, 2015 -
Re: When the Road Gives Way
Also... I AM IRONMAN!
May 15, 2015 -
Re: When the Road Gives Way
Thanks so much! I'll definitely incorporate some of your changes.
May 15, 2015 -
Re: When the Road Gives Way
Thanks so much!
May 15, 2015 -
Re: You Need to read this
Thanks. :D
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: You Need to read this
Unscrambled version? :(
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Synesthesia
Hi! Nice story... but G is yellow! :P
Dec 25, 2014 -
Re: storms
Thank you for your feedback! :)
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: storms
Thank you, Cavalin! Merry Christmas! :D
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: Twelve Days of Fading Love (A Collection of Haikus)
No problem! You are an excellent writer. :)
Dec 24, 2014 -
Re: the crack of a bat
Thank you, introworded! Happy holidays! :D
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: Caramel Pup
It's a very, very old poem--trust me. Thanks for the feedback, Maddie. :)
Dec 23, 2014 -
Re: Caramel Pup
Thank you, Lauren! I'll keep that feedback in mind for when I edit.
Dec 22, 2014 -
Re: Don't Worry I was Already Chipped Before You Shattered Me
No, wait. Get rid of the period after "a/p/a/r/t", and have no period at the end.
Sep 26, 2014