Hannah

You have a lot of power in some of the rhymes of this poem. As you found out (I assume, since you chose it as the title), the strongest moment ...

Look at this. I'm right back at you, Knight Nite. I wonder if I'll discover more of your works buried here in the bottom of the Green Room as the ...

Oooh, this seems to be a theme of yours in this batch of poems you posted: leaving the meat behind the scenes. It's awesome. I remember writing in my own ...

Super simple. Super full. The simplicity of this poem and the fact that you, yourself, make no judgment upon her actions leaves the reader to think for themselves. What does ...

Hey, Spinelli. Loving your view point, as always. You get at things from such a fresh perspective, and that's really going to do a lot of good for whatever you ...

Ahh! I have so much interest in this section, but again, this is not flash fiction, but a section of a larger piece. Because of that, I'm not sure why ...

Hmm. This is interesting. I'm going to be reviewing it from my idea of what makes good flash fiction, which means there's an entire sense of story contained in the ...

Hey there~ It's me again. (: This is an okay start. You definitely have a lot more philosophy in this poem than the other one I just reviewed. I really ...

Hey there! ~ Fellow cat-lover here. Haha. Maybe this is not at all the feeling you wanted your poem to go in, but I am wondering if you intended to ...

Uh. This is amazing. I am not religious and I don't want to be, but I can understand so clearly the idea behind this because of the image and narrative ...

This is gorgeous. There is so much feeling in this poem, elegantly carried by most of the vocabulary. I love the idea of architecture, and it fit perfectly with the ...

This reads very much like a stream of thought piece, and that's admirable. It nearly captures how this character is thinking about the world around her. What I like especially ...

It's definitely something we've all experienced. It's a common human feeling to feel like we've got a couple of selves working in our body, or that we have to wear ...

I think your poem ends here: is especially audible at night. And everything after that is just dragging it on. In that moment, we know that no matter what this ...

What is here that hasn't been written before? I'm not discounting your effort. I'm not saying, "Feel like you wrote something completely meaningless", but I am asking you to honestly ...