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I think the first thing your writing could benefit from is you going through with the strictest of eyes to see which words are unnecessary in the meaning that you ...

Alright! First, please make sure from now on to spell-check your work before you post it up. Spelling errors are easy to find with word processors, or even on the ...

You do have this going for you: you have me interested about what exactly this professor has discovered and what practical uses it has, if he'll indeed get out of ...

Okay! First, I will very quickly give my over all perception of this song. I feel like a sentiment on this topic is better delivered with an "us" in mind ...

Yo yeah! I am leaving some comments as I work my way through: But on the way back, a man had fired a gun and she'd dropped it with a ...

I love a lot in this poem, and I think a lot in this poem falls flat. The highest concentration of awesome is here: a tarnished memory of the sweet ...

Hey, this was probably meant to be put in the storybooks section of the website, but I figured a little reviewing of it couldn't hurt anyway, right? So I'll give ...

Hey! This is a pretty interesting introduction. The idea of opening at the end is one that works pretty well. I mean, now we know this character has to die, ...

Okay, hey Soul! What's good about this piece is that it opens up a whole new world in just a couple of paragraphs. I think I like best when books ...

Right away, the first thing that needs attention is tenses. You switch tenses between the first and second and it happens again a little later. Choose past or choose present, ...

Hey, Kay. So I want to start out by saying this is full of feeling for people who care about animals. And there's a lot that goes on in this ...

This was awesome. I love that the rhymes aren't forced at all, that it brings out a lot of images (I'm a sucker for sea imagery and stories), and that ...

Oh my, I love this. I think it needs more thought and more work, but I love the quick step timing of the rhythm and the direct address. The opening ...

This is absolutely a fantastic idea for a piece. A lot of us have read the stories where the main character is bothered because the kid they like doesn't like ...

I'm going to be taking this from the perspective of someone who has a vague idea of mythology, but hasn't studied it obsessively. And for me, that makes this poem ...