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Re: Splish, Splash
Oh, hey, Dark! Here I am to review some of your POETRY, now. I'll get back to the last two pieces of your pokemon work a little later today. But ...
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Re: Mechanical Jellyfish: A Year in Dreams (August)
Hey there, BadNarrator. There are a couple of topics I wanna cover in this review. But first I want to say that your writing is really really good. It's crisp, ...
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Re: A Way
Ooh. This is a common topic and one that's really tricky to deal with. I am so glad that you made a poem to tackle it. I am also really ...
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Re: I Wish
There is an awful lot going on in this piece. I love that you were so in touch with the emotions of the speaker that you could follow them on ...
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Re: Being "That Kid": How NOT to be a Massive D-Bag
Oh, Dannie. The fire in this piece is very, very, very clear. I like that you wrote about something for which you had so much emotion, because it definitely showed ...
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Re: A New World
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts. I really appreciate your feelings and I think poetry can definitely be a good way to start conversation or sort out and ...
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Re: Omens and Toast
Magpie. You're great. Really, you are. You're fantastic and you explore, and I love when you explore! What I love was the opening of this poem with such strong, concrete ...
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Re: False Reality
Ugh. This is a hard and powerful subject to face. We will all, at some point, be faced with trying to carry on after death. And whether subconsciously or consciously ...
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Re: To love right people Better...
Oh, my gosh. This is a problem for lucky people, but it can also be a very helpful situation. I like that you put it forward pretty bluntly. You just ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The girl behind that veil.
Hey, Idrinkink~ Nice username. Haha. Okay. First I want to say that you are good at writing sentences. You play well with rhythm building up through sentences, like you did ...
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Re: Venom [3]
Ooh, I like this exploration of bitterness. For such a powerful emotion that we feel so often, it's too frequently written off as pathetic and petty. Here, you've discovered the ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Dragons: Chapter One
Hey, Stella. I'm not sure if I've reviewed anything by you before, so this is a treat! I love the smooth delivery of the premise of this story. The princess ...
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Re: They Called Me A Liar
Hey! Okay, I don't know if this was your intention with the poem, but what I really loved was the idea I got that this outflowing of "I am not ...
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Re: Sky Haven
Alright. I am in love and adoration with this line: In sun-stricken skies. This builds the world so much more quickly than any amount of explanatory prose could do, I ...
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Re: Deathbed Prayer
Hey, nite! I first want to say that I really like your bravery in setting forth an attempt as such powerful and widespread emotion in such a short poem. In ...
Jun 30, 2013
