Hannah

Hey there, Nickstark! So, my first though while reading through this was that you definitely don't have to have the line breaks. You mention that it's a short story with ...

Hiii, Dark! "Heh heh, I never thought I'd enjoy hearing that." Jason chuckled. "Oh, Ryan what have you done to me?" What is this supposed to mean? Did Jason start ...

Hey, Fortis. I'm going to make a list of questions I have and hopefully as you're answering and thinking about them, you'll find ways you want to change this poem. ...

Hey, I'm here for a third peek, and it seems like my advice will be mostly the same. I like the rhyme in this poem, actually. I think it definitely ...

Hey! I'm here again for another dip into your poetry. What a nice way to get to know you. :) So I have to say I like much more the ...

Hmmmm. Well, first of all, introductions are in order! I'm Hannah, and I'm here representing the Knights of the Green Room, and I think I'm going to review a couple ...

Okay! So first of all I have to say that I read this poem like three times and am still not confident that I understand it. I also acknowledge that ...

What. I thought I had it figured it out. The first time I read through, I thought this guy was just watching a girl in his neighborhood and then saw ...

Hey, there! So I'm not sure if I'm just not on the right wavelength for this or something, but the impression I got while reading was that this was just ...

My good Squire Therese! I am here at your service and the service of the Knights of the Green Room, but mostly you. ;) My first instinct upon seeing this ...

Hey, Dark! Huh. It sucks that Jake doesn't even care that he'd hurt Flannery by messing with Jason's family. I do wanna say something about this section: "Well I'm a ...

Hey, Renard. So my first instinct was to come in here and talk about the awkward phrasing that got born from you trying to squeeze in rhyming where there maybe ...

I got the feeling at the end of this piece that it wasn't finished. You start talking about this specific person and how you and this person were fighting and ...

Okay, Anna Clare! I have to say that this story idea is really interesting. I started reading and I couldn't stop reading, which is actually a really big thing since ...

Hey, Knight Aley~ I'm here! I heard your call. This will be a rather quick review because I have mainly just one thing to say. This poem is right in ...