Hannah

^_^ Hallo, Merry~ Here I am, as requested.

First of all, darling, I'm so sorry for your loss, but no matter what it truly wasn't your fault. Regrets will be felt at any death -- things that 'could ...

(Like what each line has to be). Polkadotted Lion Curious and cunning Breaking things then running Simply shunning. ~~~ I'm not really expecting many replies to this, but if you ...

^_^ I'm no expert with poetry, but here are my suggestions! ^_^ A little fact of life went wrong, A little fact, but its grip was strong. I'd suggest taking ...

^_^ Hallo, I'm Hannah. Nice to meet you. Hopefully my review will help a bit, though I know you don't intend to make it into a story. “What, mother?” A ...

^_^ Not an expert on poetry, so hopefully this can prove to be a little helpful, and if not, my apologies! Do you know the real damage you have done? ...

So, I don't know if you're looking to do anything with this piece, as you say it's from your diary, but I feel like critiquing all the same, because it's ...

^_^ Hallo, Shina! Here are some suggestions for you! The sound of treading black stallions on the rocky paths chased us everywhere we went. 'Treading' seems a rather lackluster verb ...

I just finished a book called Song Quest, by Katherine Roberts. It was okay, but there were a lot of cliche similies and some parts bored me, so I skipped. ...

Squee!!! Ballet! ^_^ Here are some suggestions from a friendly Hannah who is deeply in love with ballet~ They wore bright colors and danced their hearts out. This act was ...

-stalkstalkstalk- The least I can do, right? ^_^ Jacqueline de la Faye saw her hypnotize the Prince at the ball, and bit her lip until it bled to keep from ...

Oh god, how beautiful! We've all been there, I'm certain, at one point or another, and this is just a beautiful outpouring of those feelings. My favorite part; All my ...

Aside from the lack of full-stops in this poem, which I think should be remedied to make it more readable, I have just a few comments. ^_^ behind the fish-faced ...

^_^ Mind if I slip some opinions in here? Under these personae the elements of the heart: are truly at war, are in harmony, are in vain, are completely insane ...

SO! CUTE! I love it because I could definitely see what was happening after I got to see what the work was going to be about! ^_^ Definitely very cute. ...