Hannah

^_^ Hallo, name twin! Mind if I make a few suggestions? ^_^ Just reading through this preface, it all goes REALLY quickly. I mean, I know it's just an introduction ...

^_^ Hello. Just a friendly reminder that you should review two pieces of others' works before posting any of your own and then try to keep it at least a ...

I don't mean to be offensive, but I don't think that this poem really has a lot of dimension. It's been done so many times, the inevitability of love, that ...

This is a deep and well-written poem. First of all, I'm going to just say my impression and the feelings I get from the poem because I don't know how ...

So, I had logged off for the night when I realized that I'd forgotten my Norton Anthology of British Literature Volume Two somewhere and I needed to get back online ...

Hello! A few comments from someone who's no expert on poetry but loves to read it! ^_^ I will journey through your tears; into the dark night of your soul. ...

This poem has the potential to be really great. I don't mean any offense at all by this, but just from reading it through once, I think it would be ...

^_^ Hiii, I'm Hannah! I stopped by just to offer a few comments. First off: first impressions. I get the feeling there is a LOT of back-story to this scene, ...

Hi love! Here as promised!

^_^ Hello~ Just a few suggestions. I'm Hannah, by the way! I agree with the previous comment about taking out the ellipses. I think that if you used the correct ...

Yay! Part two~ Here are a few of my comments! ^_^ Her back was turned to me, so I couldn’t read her lips. Ash, who rarely talked anyway, barely moved ...

Because I saw you posted a second part, I wanted to come back and read the first! I have just a few comments/suggestions. I still have the scars of where ...

'Lo, Gahks. Great to see another piece of your work. I have just a few comments. My first impression that I get from this poem is that, because of the ...

^_^ Hello. I don't know how much you'll be able to expand this, as I don't know your word count limit or how much this current piece is shy of ...

^_^ My favorite cat is named after Icarus, so I couldn't pass up reviewing this poem! ^_^ What fool Icarus for trying to be a man while clinging tight to ...