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Re: the essence of you in springtime
Hello, screamingsloth. Nice to meet you! Oh my goodness, those last two lines are so rich! Drifting among the bees not only gives that sense of movement, but also a ...
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: North Dakota (I miss you)(I love you)
Willard, hi! I was immediately struck by this poem's opening. I love the sense of being aware, but also longing to be unaware. I know that love is a social ...
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: Derek
Hi, Kazeybear! So sorry to see that this poem has gone without a response for so long. :( I took the time to go and look at the photo story ...
Apr 24, 2017 -
Re: serendipity
Jyva, hi! Nice to meet you! Thought I'd swing by and leave a quick review on this poem, and say sorry you haven't had another before now! So, to be ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: God Loves his Children
First off, hi. Secondly, ugh. This is so nice. Part I appropriately describes the fractured, thoughtless type of sloth that creeps up on everyone at some point in life. Sometimes ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Twice the foreigner
First of all, hi! I don't think I've seen you around before, so it's nice to meet you. Second of all, this title and your explanation beneath the work really ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: sweet dream, nightmare
Autumns, I remember this was the poem that first made me wanna be friends and jam with ya! I saw it was hanging out in the green room, so I ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: masquerade
Apricity, Hi! So, I enjoyed how easily I could understand this poem -- how it worked to lay the emotion out on top, even while kind of bending it through ...
Apr 21, 2017 -
Re: Just a birthday
Hi, Spartan! Happy birthday, first of all. :) I like that you chose to commemorate a special event in your life with a poem. That's one of my favorite things ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: The Rings of Saturn
Fortis, hi! I remember seeing some poetry about Saturn from your NaPo and felt drawn to it because oh my god, seeing Saturn through a telescope at an observatory was ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: Repetoire
Hi, StupidSoup. :) First of all, I feel like I'm clearly receiving the theme and feeling that you're trying to communicate, and I also feel like I strongly identify it, ...
Apr 18, 2017 -
Re: campfire hums
Hi, Marmalade! So I'm feeling like there a couple distinct sections of this poem that don't quite jive for me as a reader just yet. First, you've got awesome imagery, ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: Cycle 1, Motif 1
Hey there! I am not quite sure if this is referencing another literary work or not, but I am just gonna give it a quick review as it is. Feel ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: Bholla Baj
Hey there! I was also drawn in by the tagline, and wanted to see what this was all about. First of all, I love the personality of the title character. ...
Mar 22, 2017 -
Re: The Fire Underneath of things - 4 & 5
So, some more things happening in this chapter, huh? I love that we get the chance to see what these characters do when they're not interacting with one another as ...
Mar 22, 2017
