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Willard, hi! I was immediately struck by this poem's opening. I love the sense of being aware, but also longing to be unaware. I know that love is a social ...

Hi, Kazeybear! So sorry to see that this poem has gone without a response for so long. :( I took the time to go and look at the photo story ...

Jyva, hi! Nice to meet you! Thought I'd swing by and leave a quick review on this poem, and say sorry you haven't had another before now! So, to be ...

First off, hi. Secondly, ugh. This is so nice. Part I appropriately describes the fractured, thoughtless type of sloth that creeps up on everyone at some point in life. Sometimes ...

First of all, hi! I don't think I've seen you around before, so it's nice to meet you. Second of all, this title and your explanation beneath the work really ...

Autumns, I remember this was the poem that first made me wanna be friends and jam with ya! I saw it was hanging out in the green room, so I ...

Apricity, Hi! So, I enjoyed how easily I could understand this poem -- how it worked to lay the emotion out on top, even while kind of bending it through ...

Hi, Spartan! Happy birthday, first of all. :) I like that you chose to commemorate a special event in your life with a poem. That's one of my favorite things ...

Fortis, hi! I remember seeing some poetry about Saturn from your NaPo and felt drawn to it because oh my god, seeing Saturn through a telescope at an observatory was ...

Hi, StupidSoup. :) First of all, I feel like I'm clearly receiving the theme and feeling that you're trying to communicate, and I also feel like I strongly identify it, ...

Hi, Marmalade! So I'm feeling like there a couple distinct sections of this poem that don't quite jive for me as a reader just yet. First, you've got awesome imagery, ...

Hey there! I am not quite sure if this is referencing another literary work or not, but I am just gonna give it a quick review as it is. Feel ...

Hey there! I was also drawn in by the tagline, and wanted to see what this was all about. First of all, I love the personality of the title character. ...

So, some more things happening in this chapter, huh? I love that we get the chance to see what these characters do when they're not interacting with one another as ...

Back again! I feel like the pacing is dragging a bit at the start of this chapter, just because of course we just had a flashback. Maybe you can consider ...