HannaLynn

It is about my life...and thank you for your feesback and I appreciate your offer but I%u2019m not one for talking to people.

Thank you. I wish other people saw things like this the wa you do. The people at my school aren%u2019t like that. But thank you it means a lot.

thank you, i know that it needs commas i realized that right after i published it and haven gotten around to fixing it, and seep is the right word. However ...

Thank you, it happened many years ago. I just try to channel the pain into poetry and stories.

Thank you I think you are right with adding more poeticness. And this is all based on real vents in my life. Absolutely nothing in this poem was dramatized.Thank you ...

I thought about that but I wrote this in a short amount of time when I was really tired (because I%u2019m sick right now) and I couldn%u2019t think of better ...

I typed it in Microsoft word and when I typed it out I had breaks between each Stanza but when I pasted it onto her they vanished. Thank you for ...

Oh, it's ok, thank you for the feedback though.

Thank you for the feedback, however I was going for an ABAB rhyming pattern and it was really hard to find a word that rhymes with slowly and fit into ...

You've done such a fantastic job expressing the way people treats infatuation as if it's love. However just a few small notes: We're should be I am. There should be ...

Wow! I love it! This quite literally explains my life. Why can't people just understand that I don't want to be asked thirty fucking questions for every emotion that shows ...

Wow! I love it! This quite literally explains my life. Why can't people just understand that I don't want to be asked thirty fucking questions for every emotion that shows ...

Hey bellarke! I really like this poem. It is so very relatable to me personally and for others. You did such a wonderful job expressing ( i'm assuming ) your ...