Halloween

Maybe I'm wrong, but I think all three of them are on crack. Don't change a thing.

Just a thought, and maybe it's just me, but if this were my story, I would think about rearranging the order of chapters. This is what I would do: I ...

I can't stay mad at you. Because your my friend and only trying to help.

A great poem as always. The feeling of not wanting to let go of a love that you shared with someone really comes through.

Just so you know, the story doesn't have to be about the revolutionary war. Even if you are calling the enemy solders "Lobster-backs". This story can take place in a ...

Well they've got Snoink, I always suspected her... Or him rather. Anyway, Sureal needs to keep in mind that the $10,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 bail is American money. Where are you going to ...

I would like to take this time to publicly thank Silverstar for the advice. Thanks to Silverstar, my story does not look like the mess it did initially. Thank you ...

Wait a minute, is this a haiku? Okay, it's all coming together now. I see what's going on. I think I do get it.

If anyone can tell me why my story got all bunched up and how to fix it that would be great. I would love to know why so I don't ...

Maybe I need to work on my metaphors. The chainsaw in my head is a reference to my snoring. I snore loudly. I noticed you changed your... uh... picture thingy. ...

I had a chance to read a few of your poems. Of all the ones I've read, I like this one the most. I did not feel like the word ...

I like your poem. I'd like to think I understand what your getting at, but I never can tell.[/b]