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  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: kys? no just run away to be the yws person you always wanted to be

    Title: kys? no just run away to be the yws person you always wanted to be I'm assuming "kys" stands for "kill yourself" and "yws" stands for "young writers society"? ...

    Mar 31, 2023
  • Lyrics » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: i exist but im considered useless

    Interpretations/Comments (Only Stanzas 1 and 2): Line 1 (Surrounding ocean with a pale gray sky) - The immediate usage of "ocean" and "pale gray sky" feels like a symbolization of ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: The Smashed Man Meets the Smiling Man — A Crossover Story

    The simplicity of this scene is quite pleasant and easily digestible despite the content itself and what is actually happening or what will happen. Even though this is a short ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Your Disguise, My Demise

    I think the title goes well with the intention you're trying to convey here in your lyrical work. According to Google, disguise as a verb means to "give (someone or ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Theatre Re: Wild Child's Giddy Eye

    LiL, aka Halfhearted Amateur, here to write a review! I absolutely love this. I know Legacy and Akelia seem utterly confused by this song, but I think it's super fun ...

    Jan 16, 2023
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Theatre Re: Poppy- Just a tiny verse of it

    According to Google, Poppy can be defined as two meanings: (1) Noun - A herbaceous plant with showy flowers, milky sap, and rounded seed capsules. Many poppies contain alkaloids and ...

    Jan 16, 2023


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