HalfheartedAmateur

Title: The love of a family From the title, I assume this will be a lovely and heartfelt short story. It probably will be bittersweet because the interconnection between love ...

Title: She Don’t Want a Lot for Christmas We love a good Mariah Carey parody/satire/mashup. Commentaries/Interpretations: "And getting your tears all over the floor of our sacrificial shrine?" - I ...

Title: Have a Good Clucking Day I hope you have a good clucking day as your title presents to us readers as well. I like the usage of "clucking" to ...

Title: An end and a beginning I like the simple yet interesting title since it piqued my curiosity because it sounds transparent enough but then again not everything is what ...

You are such an incredibly fabulous human being with emotions and feelings that are just as valid and important as anyone else's. Thank you for sharing this aspect of your ...

Title: The World Isn't Cruel. The People Who Live in it Are. I am immensely curious as to what the multitude of prompts inspired you to write this incredibly jaw-dropping ...

Title: kys? no just run away to be the yws person you always wanted to be I'm assuming "kys" stands for "kill yourself" and "yws" stands for "young writers society"? ...

Title - "breaded chicken" Food seems to almost always be connected with memories, the past, and good times with someone or other people of whom that person cares about and ...

The Title - "Hayley and magic" I may be reading in too deep about this, but maybe the capitalization of the "H" in Hayley signifies the self-value/self-worth as well as ...

Title - "You are Home to me" Whether or not you did this intentionally or on accident, I think it was clever and beautiful of you to only capitalize "You" ...

Title - "Falter" According to Google, falter means to "start to lose strength or momentum," "speak in a hesitant or unsteady voice," and "move unsteadily or in a way that ...

Title - "love" There are infinite amount of poems about love with beautiful analogies, lovely metaphors and similes, and loads of figurative language because there is not just one definite ...

Oh, this hurt - this struck a nerve with me because it's so incredibly relatable and vulnerably an aspect of my life. It touches my heart and my soul so ...

Title - "Last Dance" After reading this short story and looking through the already given reviews/comments, I think this title is simple yet bittersweet. It is a simple title, but ...

Title - "what is, but not i?" From the beginning, I knew this poem would hit me hard - perhaps a bit too close to home than I'd like - ...