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Wow... That was a creepy story... I shall now turn OFF my phone when I go to sleep... This was a very well written short story. Good Job! I also ...

Sagitta! This was an excellent prologue. It made me want to read even though I wasn't sure what I was reading. You had me hooked to the screen, I wanted ...

Hi ChocolateCello! This is a great (and true... especially for me XD My handwriting is SUPER messy) poem. I love how you used a problem that most writers have and ...

Hey ankush95! Welcome to the Young Writer Society! I really like this dramatic interpretation of how a poem is made. How all the thoughts in your mind fight to be ...

Hello writer 97! This piece was... AMAZING! If I had picked up this book, in a store I would have brought it right to the register and payed for it. ...

Okay. I must say, this poem was very sad, as in emotionally. I thought it was very well written. Artybirdy, it sounds like you did a lot of research on ...

Good Job! This Short story was really well done. I like the concept of a young girl enjoying the world even after it is all gone. The description of everything ...

Hello! I really like this short story! It is very descriptive! I can see the cloud in my mind! :) I like the big cliffhanger after the next step. You ...

First of all, I must say, I really like this poem, It is sad... But it is very true. Everything will die or be destroyed... Reflect on that everyone... I ...