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Hailey_Ann

  • Poetry » Other, General Re: random

    Hi... Well, this poem was a little weird...(No offense) There are only a few errors I see in here...I think that maybe there should be some punctuation somewhere, to maybe ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: "What do you "

    Hello there! Me again! I reviewed your last poem "I just want" and thought it was really cute. I like the repetition in your poems, so keep it up! Okay, ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: " I just want "

    Hey there! I'm Hailey, and I'm going to be reviewing your poem!! Okay, Here we go: I liked your poem for the most part (no offense), but some of the ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Back to Back

    Hello there! I'm Hailey, and I'll be reviewing this poem!! Okay, Usually, I dislike song-y love poems, but this one was actually really good! I had to read it more ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I am

    Hey! I'm Hailey, and I'll be reviewing this poem today!! Here we go!: Okay, There was only one little thing that I disliked about your poem, and that was the ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Awareness

    Hello there!! Hailey here, and I'll be reviewing your poem! Okay, I liked this poem a lot! It was great and held a lot of emotion for me. The wording ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Leaving home

    Hey there!! To start, I'm Hailey, and I'm happy to be reviewing your poem!! Okay, I LOVED the beginning. I think it was a strong beginning and it totally caught ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Boy Who Cried Wolf

    Wow! I usually hate repetition in poems, but this poem is an exception. I loved this poem, it gives a completely new meaning to the original "The boy who cried ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Promised

    Hey there!! Well! I must say!! This poem is just wonderful!! You did great with the wording and I liked the fact that It didn't even rhyme, but it was ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: To Lily

    Hello June!! I thought I'd drop by and leave you a comment (since you've commented on some of my pieces), and.....I found this.... Wow...This poem was so tragic, but then ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: No one...

    Hello there!! Well, first off, I'd like to say that I liked how you didn't name the poem "No one cares", you named it "No one". I thought that was ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Burned out

    Hey there! Overall, I like your poem, but as the other reviewers said, I disliked some of the word choice. You should change some of the wording because to me, ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Just Too Much

    Hey! Okay, this poem was 'okay'. It wasn't very original, but I liked some of the wording. one thing I disliked was that some of the rhyming didn't flow like ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Picture Of Life

    Hello!! Okay, I must say, the first part of this poem was my absolute favorite. I didn't really get the end because it seemed like the poem switched up some. ...

    Jun 29, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Broken.

    Hello!! Okay, I must say this poem Is absolutely beautiful!!! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem!! I have nothing bad to say about this poem (surprisingly). You had great ...

    Jun 29, 2009


it's ok, death by laughter was always how i've wanted to go out
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