Hey!
Okay, this poem was 'okay'. It wasn't very original, but I liked some of the wording. one thing I disliked was that some of the rhyming didn't flow like It should have, instead, It seemed to be a little forced. I liked the theme of the poem, but some of the time, the rhyming part was a little....(no offense) weird.
Otherwise, the poem was good. keep it up!! =]
~*Hailey,<3
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