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Actually not going to vomit my harsh comments and critique on here, because I genuinely like this piece. I mean, though I'm not a fan of all these books, I ...

Here to review what looks like another romantic short, hopefully will be fun. Going to be pointing out whatever mistakes I find out and commenting on them, and hopefully helping ...

So... going to be reviewing your work, which is titled "I". Strange name, but I'll go with it. I'll look through your work and point out most mistakes and providing ...

Alright, I'm here to review your prologue. I'm going to be pointing out mistakes in your writing and helping you out as much as I can. If I sound like ...

Aha, hadn't realised you had written a prologue, my bad. I guess I just have a poor understanding of the site at this moment in time, being new and all. ...

A starting chapter that lacks much action despite your best efforts. Too fast-paced and your writing just seems too cliché for it to be a completely original horror piece. As ...