HJYoung

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This is an interesting poem. It begins with a call to the reader, as if it is a doomsayer, a sage, calling upon omens of an apocalypse. The emphasis on ...

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Thank you so much! This is based on the halo franchise, you can learn more about the alien races on the wiki.

Thank you for your review! This is based off the Halo franchise and a lot of the stuff you pointed out are references.

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Y’know, the feeling I have when I read this is a sense of nostalgia and maybe a bit of solemn retrospection on the past. The line at the end, ‘you’ll ...

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Y’know, the feeling I have when I read this is a sense of nostalgia and maybe a bit of solemn retrospection on the past. The line at the end, ‘you’ll ...

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Y’know, the feeling I have when I read this is a sense of nostalgia and maybe a bit of solemn retrospection on the past. The line at the end, ‘you’ll ...

Bet

I don%u2019t know much about poetry terminology or stanza structure since I%u2019m a self-taught writer, so bear with me lol

Thanks so much! Yeah I didn%u2019t have the most distinct meaning in mind when I wrote this. I%u2019ll change the lax part, thanks. Fixed one of the lines in the ...

I just wrote it in a fit of poetry-related insight

Thanks! I%u2019ll add that.

Short question. Is this really fantasy, not science fiction or something? Anyways, the images give life to the piece so there’s a plus. As this chapter is rather short and ...

Sure seems like it. Keep writing!

Jesus Christ Yoshi your still going at these!? 16 Chapters jeez I remember when there were like 4