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Thats really nice. I am assuming you like someone. Eh... Well I went through this too. Nice... I know what you mean. Good work Genevieve xxx

I agree with Ayra... We aren't all 18. Please rate that. I will consider reading it and giving you a review tomorrow.

Thanks Suzanne. I don't think I will make this a story. Maybe I could turn it into poetry or something. Thanks for the info :D I will read it as ...

Thanks I will change that later I am kinda tired right now. And nope there where only skeletons. What els am I supposed to make death look like?

Well... I guess you are right XD I am just dumb. lol Well Nice work!

Well...Its really good. Nice work! Genevieve

Thanks! I will do that as soon as I have thought up the perfect word to complete my little poem! :D

I loved that! It really touched me... Wow... I am stunned now. I can't think of anything els to say but... Good job! :wink: Genevieve

Very nice work! Its deep and very well done! Keep poeting!

Thank you so much Ayra! I am glad that you are liking it. I appreciate your help and I will change my mistakes right away. Your little comparison thing is ...

Does Ruki have parents? Or is it a tipicall orphan story?

I don't really understand it. But I don't understand any poetry! Other than that nice work! Genevieve xxx

No probs! Could you please crit my Moonlight sea gull chapter 2 PLEASE!

No.. I mean to say that you should have put your last post under your first. XD Don't worry your reviewing is fine!

I think you should have just edited your last post Ayra. I dono...