Gwenevire

Haha. Thanks. Do you go to her school or something?

Thanks :D I am going to write the first chapter either tonight or tomorrow.

Thanks! I will :D

I love you to Camille! :D Yay, a letter for me! I feel so special!

Thanks Ayra. I don't know... Maybe this will be Gwenevire seeing herself get killed and that's how she gets brought into the other world. Yes! It shall be that XD ...

Oh that's okay :D I shall do that!

Thanks for the help XD Yes I did get the idea from you. I hope you don't mind... So no suggestions?

I like what you have added on. Keep going and you'll make me cry!

Its nice but not very well dun. Maybe some more description would do. Its icky! Good work! :D

Thank you! :D I will be sure to do that!

No silly its a letter to my cuisine Ayra. (Camille) But nice idea with the story I might consider doing that through like a letter thing! Thanks :D

I love this! Its so funny! It has inspired me to write something! :D I lobe how Random Guy 2 keeps on coming back to life! Keep writing!

Thats really nice :D I like it. I am no poetry master so all I have to say is keep going. Sorry for the crap review XD

That was nice. But is Hel a name or someone? I am kinda lost. I am not really good at poetry so I don't have any suggestions. But maybe you ...

Thanks! :D What is confusing you? I tried to make the Woman and the Girl different so it was easier to read. Double space? Whey? No I don't know what ...