Gwenevire

It sucks...:lol: I just read it over again and it totally sucks! XD

Thanks! And the girl dies not the wolf! XD What do you mean by the Ellipses? I am sort of confused! (Typical me I am just dumb!)

Thanks a million! :D I don't know what I would do without you! :P

Thanks! :D

Wow...Thank you! You have just made that clear to me and now I get it! Thanks...I will do some work on it soon. But not know because I am moving ...

Wow! Please separate your story! Its really hard to read!

Oh! Thanks :D

Wow that's intense...But sort of hard to follow along with.

Wow... Good work! I think you need to say foals less though... :D

Wow! :clap: Very good! It blew me away! I was on my toes! I really felt that...Good work!

I have one suggestion...Separate your work...Then I will read it! :D

What? The ABC BB kinda mixed me up :lol:

Oops. I am such a dope! Thanks!

Yah...I am just to lazy! :lol: Cheque out my new poem!

I see what you mean...But what more could I say?