GummyBearEater

Stars appear on velvet sky as those cheerful sun beams fade. They wave the sunny rays goodbye and in the darkness, they stayed. The western sky is turning dark, now ...

hahaha of course it's obvious.... autumn.... haha...

man.... those comments hurt me a lot...... most of these are one-sided comments... they only tell what you think and not what the writer thinksssss all people are different... our ...

i know its secret..... read every 3rd letter of every line backwards....... it says "i love you very much" sweet princess.....

man.... i really did not think it would be that good.... thanks for all your comments.. i hope i'll be a better poet someday.... all because of your comments! thanks ...

yes, i admit some lines are a bit off course... that's because i meant to make it an acrostic... otherwise the acrostic would have been ruined...

hey.. do you hate humans? i hate them.... i agree with your work.... great job

thanks... never thought you'd think it's that good...

i like it, really....its so vampiric like myself and Winjuri.....

Sweet man.... its like you're so in love with someone.... Sweet...

the rain is a very delicate subject... i like your poem.... keep it up man!

i really hope she does....

Time Time passes by like wind to me, Unlocking future like a key, Unseen by all but treasured most, And sometimes feared much like a ghost You cannot hear it ...

to those who've read my poem.... if you read the first letters from the bottom going up, you'll spot the dedication of this poem... thanks for the comments..

To all who've read this... the name of the inspiration of this poem is in itself... look closely.. have fun!!