GryphonFledgling

I'm not really into necromancy as a subject, but I will say that I loved these books. It's been a long while since I read them, so I don't remember ...

Geez, these books are most certainly in my top five. Nathaniel was such a complex character. I loved him one minute, hated his guts the next. Bartimaeus was such an ...

I don't know why I love these books, but I do... I just hope that the movie doesn't butcher it. I agree that the books are a little long-winded and ...

I love these books, though technically most people would say I am too old for them... In fact, I just reread them last night... I must say that the first ...

I loved this book. It was so short and sweet and yet so complex that I wanted to cry sometimes. I agree that this was a huge insight to autism. ...

Oooohhh.... Feedback Questions 1) What do you think of Judge Esten? Does she seem like a realistic character? I really liked her. She is a great character. 2) Do you ...

I liked this. The language of it just drew me in. It was quite like reading Jane Austin... One thing that did confuse me a bit was the change in ...

Wow. Very nice piece. I'm not generally into the emo/slasher type story, but you actually made me care about this character. I can't put my finger on exactly what drew ...

The grammar errors have already been caught, those pesky little devils... So I will continue with other story critiques. This was essentially a big info-dump in all honesty. You tell ...

Yes please, a proofread... Also, when you do dialogue, each new person speaking should have their dialogue in a new paragraph: (ex. Bobby and Sue ran towards the train tracks. ...

Very interesting. I've never read anything quite like this. I agree with Lucky that the part where Dimitri starts talking about being trapped is odd. It just doesn't really work ...

Nice job. However, I really must stress the need for capitalization and punctuation in this poem. I am still your little girl but I am growing older I am still ...

Great job and a nice follow-up to your first chapter! I liked how Gabriel has financial trouble. I'm not sure why, but that endears me to him, that he would ...

I liked this. Your descriptions and language were great. One thing: when you have the viewpoint of the pilot, you should set it off somehow, perhaps with line breaks (ex. ...

I was a little confused past the first four lines. It looked like it was going one direction but then it did a complete 180 and went the other way. ...