Griffinkeeper

I would have read it, if you didn't threaten to kill me. Now, I must hide in my bunker and fire Nukes at you. Have a nice day. :)

I think that little dragon should be named something funny, like Snarkindron.

If this were to go somewhere, I'd have it go off the cliff. I'm not talking about your writing skills, but the character in general. Alright, quick lesson from plot ...

I deny everything. Actually, I don't deny giving Snoink inspiration. Now that I think about it, she did write it on my computer... Nah, I still deny it.

Simply horrible. Yeah right. This is actually a good poem. It isn't a poem that complains how unfair life is or is full of expletives (sin uno). I don't read ...

Guardian, not Gaurdian. Sorry, that typo is annoying the heck out of me.

Interesting program. However, wouldn't this be better in a forum like writing tips?

Probably a bad word choice for that.

Everyone here is a 40 year old man, why don't we turn this into the "Old Balding Writers Society?"

#5 - Yes they do. Never touch girls. They're evil. Aren't cooties fictional? Girls are inherently evil. Sorry, manipulating minds requires it.

Your problem isn't detail, you accomplished that well. The problem is over detailing. Every thing is detailed intricately, but if you detail everything like that, it makes it difficult for ...

Sure, give me a couple of hours.

I think I'll just use it as a reference for the story.

Who am I to argue with the Fantasy Godfather?

Even without that line, it is definitely a feminine character. If it were a guy, he'd have loaded the gun and held a vigil with the loaded weapon. It is ...