Griffinkeeper

I rather liked this piece. It was very well written and while I can't say I enjoyed it (I'm rather opposed to stealing from ordinary people, which is why I ...

There are some pretty gross violations of Sherlock Holmes canon here, which makes it difficult, if not impossible to admit it to canon. Some examples: Sherlock spoke sombrely "I have ...

Welcome Sumi! Reviewing this piece is difficult. There are some typos, but the bigger problem is a lack of interest. If you're going to write about a math exam, there ...

Hey Tori, this is a review. Stream of consciousness writing is useful when you have no idea what to write, or when you need to get something down. It is ...

Hey GeeLyria, here's your review. The sun hit the sea and melted within its waves, as usual. This was Captain Alamar's way of knowing it was time to hop on ...

Hey CrazyCraz, here is a review. Shit. Where the hell are my shoes? This is kind of a lame starting line. It's like Where's my car?[/quote] only with more Tourette ...

Hello FutureAstronaut! Time for a review. This story reminds me a lot of the action movies that came out during the 1980's. The dialogue is cheesy, the plot is flimsy, ...

Hey RW, Time for a review. First, the title. It really needs one. A title like "No Title" sends a message that either A) You don't care about what you've ...

It's been too long for this story to go without some critical review. One thing that I noticed was that some of the descriptions were pretty odd. “Look above you, ...

This piece was well written. At the same time though, some elements of the librarian character seemed out of place. For instance, the idea of a librarian sleeping on the ...

All things considered, I thought it was a pretty good start. There are couple of things that surprised me. The first is that Jenson wasn't the old man's apprentice/heir. The ...

Some things seemed odd. The night outside was warm, but not exactly humid. A cool wind blew through my thin t-shirt. There was a sweater in my car. It seems ...

Fair number of spelling errors: Delecacy= delicacy Unextrodonary= un-extraordinary. (Why not say ordinary?) Gorgeing = gorging. mant= many anscestors = ancestors insinct = instinct undergowth = underg

A small crooked overhanging house within a long narrow street was host to a magical moment, for through the passing of the red sun a child had been born inside ...

Alex is right, you're missing a hook in a bad way. When I pick up a book and begin reading, I am skeptical. I'm trying to decide if I want ...