GreenTulip

I will come back to review this. :o I ran out of time earlier.

Thanks Timmy. It is very insightful and I may go back and change it. Love your sign off. :D

Poem shape? I don't know what that is. So I just write to write.

Hi. Have you never been in the middle of Nebraska on an older highway system? ON these roads- there an over abundance of corn and beans and flower filled fields.

Sighs. this is for a character for a book that I am writing. It is in my portfolio so you can go and check it out.

Hi, I wrote this as a filler, as I was currently writing the next chapters. This became a chapter.If you had read the first two chapters it owuld have explained ...

Hi, I wrote this as a filler, as I was currently writing the next chapters. This became a chapter.

If you had read the first two chapters it owuld have explained that her mother was the last of her family, but after her fathers and brothers death- her mother ...

Thank you. And I shall fix those. I didn't even notice the first two.

They were in a room with a mirror. She steps through the mirror, and there is no evidence that she is in the room. And they had candles and then ...

The times....the change would have been easy to see. They were in a sheltered room and suddenly appeared in a rain storm.

Hi, gia2505, Tulip here to relay my friends words of thanks. She would love to say thank you for the review from the bottom of her heart.

I would review this....if I saw something...

This is my outtake on it. My Dad, is in the Army, and many of my family members are or have been in the military. He is my hero and ...

Hi, this is an alright review for it being your first one. 1. I wrrote this to symboliza the unspoken relationship between my brothers and I. The oldest and the ...