GreenTulip

Thank you. If you like, I can give you the link to the book that this is based off of. This is a story, (kinda a fanfic), based off one ...

Hi, GreenTulip here. This poem is based off the three words/phrases that military brats hear so many times. It is these three words that govern our lives.

Thank you. And I have been working on it more, but I am writing so many other things at the same time that this has gotten pushed to the side. ...

Thank you

I am from a military family, soooooo

Hi..this is the link (on another site) to her book.

Whilst you call yourselves cry babies I was the one trying not to cry while writing it.

Thank you!

I changed the last stanza if you wish to rad it once more.

I edited just a little bit.

Thank you. I changed it a little bit.

Thank you. And I have a back story for it, but I didn't know how to add it in. :) I can share it with you if you wish.

Thank you

I was defending my friend. She was upset by the review. I was just voicing her anger.

This isn't true at all. Almost everyone knows that the world isn't perfect. This line really stuck out to me. It felt rather accusatory. It's probably because the "royal we" ...