GreenLight24

Indeed it is hahaha

Thanks a lot! I appreciate ur compliments! Thanks so much for this review, ill take your criticisms into consideration ;)

Haha. Agreed. In lad I found someone on here with a musical background who knows what that's like. That will help tremendously should I decide to continue this. ;)

Yeah. I might make a sequel. Not sure yet. But I'm glad u enjoyed it thanks for the compliments hahaha. :) And nice suggestions. Ya never know what could happen! ...

Thanks! I'm glad u enjoyed it! :D

Thanks for the compliments. I'm glad u liked it. I fixed my dialogue formatting for the most part hahaha. ;) And yeah, nothing beats an evil babysitter.

I changed it. Thanks for the review. It's my first fanfic that I've posted on this site. I usually like to do more serious topics, but I always wanted to ...

And no, I'm not a musician, but thanks anyways. :P

Thanks a lot. This is all very very helpful. I agree with you 100 % about the non action with a lot of speech. I contemplated maybe using action to ...

Hey there! I'm new to this site and am looking for other writers to yws with. (yes, i just used yws as a verb.) I like this poem and I'll ...

I like this piece very much. Well done. I would write a review, but it seems that the main things have already been addressed. Great work though! I'll follow you...I ...

Incredible. I love the way you made the girl sound so innocent and the father so monstrous, literally saying he sounds like a monster. Tough stuff. I applaud you greatly ...

I like this beginning! So many questions! So many possibilities! Great job ;)