GrayButterfly

Thanks for the review :)

Thanks so much :D I do love Invader Zim, and I didn't even think about it when I created this lol. Thanks for the review and critiques :)

Well keep going! You won't regret it :)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D

Thanks, I'll have to check it out :)

Thank you so much :) The fantastical aspects vs the figurative are supposed to be up to the reader and how they interpret it, but I can see how that ...

Thanks, I will definitely give it a read

@Lives4Christ24 thank you :) I'll see if I can find it

Thanks! :)

Thank you for your review! I've actually decided to rewrite this book because I want to be more intentional with the way I write the story. I was already intentional ...

Thanks! The maze runner inspiration was not completely intentional, but I think my brain took some without me knowing if that makes sense. Thanks again :D

No problem :)

Thank you for the review! I will adress these critiques for sure :)

Thank you! Yeah, I agree about the whole pacing thing. I also felt it was a little slow, but I wasn't sure how to fix it. I will for sure ...

It's kind of like a totalitarian leader, but the central idea (I will explain it later on in the story) is that the government is trying to make a "perfect ...