Gravity

thanks for the review. I know about formatting poems and punctuation, everything I did there was entirely intentional and I proofread this poem several times before I posted it. I'm ...

YES! AH! It rocks :) Great job!

oh. lol I just remembered that reference. No that's not where that came from. My Grandpa died last April and my Mom used to Nurse the Elderly so that's what ...

Well see I warned you but SOMEONE wouldn't listen :p

Thanks Aley, this was a really good review. You're right. This is not one of my best short stories. Not at all. This is the first short story I wrote ...

lol it was when she fell down the stairs. I tried to make that clear when I mentioned the blood stains on the couch where her head had been.

No problem :)

okay cool, sorry I didn't know that part XD

Well then. I hope you plan on finishing this! If and when you do, let me know.

I'm sorry. But I was a victim of mental abuse that was of a very sexual nature, and there is no reason for you to compare our abuse of Earth ...

thank you

yup

And here I was, so excited to read a good joke :/ As far as editing literary works, I really hate that I can't delete works that I'm done with. ...

Note: This review has been deleted
Heya! Gravity here for a review. Let me just say that the Titanic has always fascinated me. I'm already sucked in to this piece, even though it isn't the first ...

your day will come. Thank you for your compliments!