Gravity

Thanks Blue, yeah I see your points and they are all very valid. Some of it I'm going to change and I had Sage step out into traffic for a ...

Thanks!

so sorry! didn't mean to review this twice!

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Heya! Grav here for another review So this is the second chapter of yours that I'm reviewing. This just gets more and more interesting. I do have some nitpicks, mostly ...

I'm going to come back and review this later, I just wanted to say 2 things a. I LOVED THIS b. Christian and Elliot are brothers in the book 50 ...

Finally! Someone caught that! :D

I know, my intent was to make the first chapter short, just to introduce the reader to Ellie. The chapters are about to get much longer.

Thank you, that's very nice of you to say and I appreciate it :)

As for the grammatical errors I understand that there may be some. It's been a very long time since I've written a short story and even longer since I wrote ...

I appreciate your review but honestly, it was really harsh. Did I do anything right? Or are you telling me that the whole thing was crap?

thanks and yes, I do legitimately have depression. It seems like you can relate

Seriously. I posted this because it was taking up drafts in my folder. The Untitled novel doesn't exist anymore. I didn't think it would end up in the greenroom.

#OneRepublic! Nice poem by the way :) XOXO, Gravity

PLEASE STOP COMMENTING ON THIS. IT'S ANNOYING AND I'M NOT USING THIS. I JUST PUBLISHED IT TO GET IT OUT OF MY DRAFTS FOLDER. SERIOUSLY. THE NOTIFS ARE SPAM.

ohhh okay that makes sense. Nvm then :)