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Deanie, thanks for the review and I appreciate the advice. When I wrote this I was still in shock after everything that happened, so my tone was supposed to be ...

Oh, the five items I had to choose from, from the cornucopia were a dog who sniffs poison, a foot long rope, an invisibility cloak that only works at night, ...

LOVE IT!

1. Hufflepuff is also known for hardworking they are, not just their loyalty. Other than that, it's a bit long but I love it. I

1. Hufflepuff is also known for hardworking they are, not just their loyalty. Other than that, it's a bit long but I love it. I

1. Hufflepuff is also known for hardworking they are, not just their loyalty. Other than that, it's a bit long but I love it. I

I was waiting to see if anybody would pick out the "No" thing that you pointed out. That was a stylistic choice, it was supposed to put some emphasis behind ...

Thanks :)

This was basically the fault in our stars... not a big fan. sorry.

Thanks Lu, :)

Awww thanks Lu! I think this is actually the first time you've reviewed any of my works without any nitpicks. I respect your opinion on my works, so this just ...

Oh and there are 21 words XD

Actually the rhyme scheme was intended to be ABCB. Not ABAB so I don't think there's anything wrong with the rhyme scheme :)

Thanks!!!

Thanks! :)